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For a class project

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It's a good attempt at shooting from the hip. It looks like that guy with the book on the left caught you in the act. It feels a bit too busy, though, like there's no central subject. Also, it feels confined by the white on the right and half the person in the frame on the left.

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Mein Luftkissenfahrzeug ist mit Aalen voll
Il mio hovercraft č pieno di anguille
Mi aerodeslizador está lleno de anguilas
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Thanks for the advice.Some of this i do know and have fixed,these b and w's are just extra prints that i have left over from my presented/fixed work for my class. (These are usually the first ones that i print that i will be posting) :D

Oh yeah...and he sure did catch....be was the one that i wanted in the picture! hahaha:XD:

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"If you can make it through any art without being completely emotionally pushed in one direction, then it hasn't done its job."- glassjaw

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